Well as the title of the thread pretty much sums up its a fan story centered around possibly my most favored of gaming series Silent Hill. Note I say fan story and not fan fiction. This is because this is an all original story, which works because to me SH always seemed to me as one of those ideas where there were plenty of small stories apart of the greater whole. Ok I got side tracked. So I say fan story becuase even though the story may make nods or references to the "canon" story that is Silent Hill unlike fanfiction I'm not trying to shoe-horn it into canon. If you find it fits then thank you very much and I shall take it as a compliment.
Anyway I have the beginning and first 2 parts completed and randomly work on it while I can. Especially since I go to boot camp in November updates will become kind of random. So here is what I have finished so far. Note this is a raw manuscript meaning yes there may be plenty of grammar and punctuation mistakes but currently I am waiting for my normal editor to "red pen" it as it were. so without further ado...
Prologue
I had that dream again last night.
In that dream I saw a town I could only vaguely remember.
Silent Hill…
In my dream I was a child again. Did I grow up here? Was this my home at some point?
This town held some sort o power over my dreaming mind.
In the dream I'm wandering aimlessly through the town. I have no idea where I am but at the same time I have a feeling someone is calling out to me allowing me to know where I'm going. I'm thinking of how strange this is in my head yet my body is out of my control and I keep walking.
The strangest part being that in my dream I'm ten years old instead of twenty-two. Though this isn't that important just an odd observation one makes in those out of body dreams.
Eventually my dream hits the same part as it does every time.
I'm walking through a decrepit burned out school. Judging by the remains of the rust, blood and scorched walls it was a elementary school. I can see movement in the shadows. They stooped and hunched figures trying to avoid any light.
These shadows were never a threat as long as I stayed away from the dark corners.
All I did know was that I was following soft cries that carried from somewhere in the building. From what I can tell it was a girl. She sounded so incredibly sad it made my heart ache. What made it more unnerving was that she was calling out my name.
"Damien…"
After reaching the second floor without fail I begin to pick up speed. As I'm nearing a classroom at the end of the hall the voice grows louder. I begin to sweat as my body heats up as if I'm walking around a fire.
As my hand closes around the knob to the room the cries become soft whimpers and my heart is beating a mile a minute. I stop wondering what could be behind the door. Before I could lose my nerve I throw the door open.
And I see her.
A young girl possibly between twelve and fourteen years old sits in the center of what remained of the classroom. She's wearing a blue school uniform and her shoulders are hunched as she's crying. I can't see her face because it is obscured by her long black hair.
Cautiously I walk forward. After my first step into the room she goes quiet. It's at this point I finally speak.
"Who are you?"
Even my voice is that of a scared version of my child self. The girl sniffles before slumping over in a new wave of whimpers. I take a few timid steps forward.
"Hello Miss? Are you ok?"
Again she goes quiet as I speak. After a few more steps I'm right behind her. From the parts of her skin I can see she is covered in cuts and bruises. I hesitantly reach my hand out and rest it on her shoulder.
In a flash she throws her head back causing me to topple backward onto the floor. In a blink of an eye she was on her feet still facing away from me. The room filled with an unbearable heat. All around me flames sprang up out of the desks and chairs.
I was frozen in a mixture a fear and curiosity. Something inside me needed to see this girl's face. As if by seeing it I would remember more of my forgotten past. The girl slowly turned towards me seeming to grow taller as the fire intensified.
As she did her flesh morphed from cuts and bruises to terrible burns.
Just as I was about to see her face a piercing air raid siren sounds from the distance. I clutch my ears trying to block out the noise but it's useless. I could no longer feel the heat from the flames that were now closing in around us. Soon my vision begins to fail me.
The girl is reaching out to me while bringing her obscured face closer. I wanted to see her face but everything was quickly fading to black. Before everything did she whispered one last thing to me.
"I'm waiting for you. I'm waiting in Silent Hill."
Anyway I have the beginning and first 2 parts completed and randomly work on it while I can. Especially since I go to boot camp in November updates will become kind of random. So here is what I have finished so far. Note this is a raw manuscript meaning yes there may be plenty of grammar and punctuation mistakes but currently I am waiting for my normal editor to "red pen" it as it were. so without further ado...
Prologue
I had that dream again last night.
In that dream I saw a town I could only vaguely remember.
Silent Hill…
In my dream I was a child again. Did I grow up here? Was this my home at some point?
This town held some sort o power over my dreaming mind.
In the dream I'm wandering aimlessly through the town. I have no idea where I am but at the same time I have a feeling someone is calling out to me allowing me to know where I'm going. I'm thinking of how strange this is in my head yet my body is out of my control and I keep walking.
The strangest part being that in my dream I'm ten years old instead of twenty-two. Though this isn't that important just an odd observation one makes in those out of body dreams.
Eventually my dream hits the same part as it does every time.
I'm walking through a decrepit burned out school. Judging by the remains of the rust, blood and scorched walls it was a elementary school. I can see movement in the shadows. They stooped and hunched figures trying to avoid any light.
These shadows were never a threat as long as I stayed away from the dark corners.
All I did know was that I was following soft cries that carried from somewhere in the building. From what I can tell it was a girl. She sounded so incredibly sad it made my heart ache. What made it more unnerving was that she was calling out my name.
"Damien…"
After reaching the second floor without fail I begin to pick up speed. As I'm nearing a classroom at the end of the hall the voice grows louder. I begin to sweat as my body heats up as if I'm walking around a fire.
As my hand closes around the knob to the room the cries become soft whimpers and my heart is beating a mile a minute. I stop wondering what could be behind the door. Before I could lose my nerve I throw the door open.
And I see her.
A young girl possibly between twelve and fourteen years old sits in the center of what remained of the classroom. She's wearing a blue school uniform and her shoulders are hunched as she's crying. I can't see her face because it is obscured by her long black hair.
Cautiously I walk forward. After my first step into the room she goes quiet. It's at this point I finally speak.
"Who are you?"
Even my voice is that of a scared version of my child self. The girl sniffles before slumping over in a new wave of whimpers. I take a few timid steps forward.
"Hello Miss? Are you ok?"
Again she goes quiet as I speak. After a few more steps I'm right behind her. From the parts of her skin I can see she is covered in cuts and bruises. I hesitantly reach my hand out and rest it on her shoulder.
In a flash she throws her head back causing me to topple backward onto the floor. In a blink of an eye she was on her feet still facing away from me. The room filled with an unbearable heat. All around me flames sprang up out of the desks and chairs.
I was frozen in a mixture a fear and curiosity. Something inside me needed to see this girl's face. As if by seeing it I would remember more of my forgotten past. The girl slowly turned towards me seeming to grow taller as the fire intensified.
As she did her flesh morphed from cuts and bruises to terrible burns.
Just as I was about to see her face a piercing air raid siren sounds from the distance. I clutch my ears trying to block out the noise but it's useless. I could no longer feel the heat from the flames that were now closing in around us. Soon my vision begins to fail me.
The girl is reaching out to me while bringing her obscured face closer. I wanted to see her face but everything was quickly fading to black. Before everything did she whispered one last thing to me.
"I'm waiting for you. I'm waiting in Silent Hill."
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