check out my really rough draft

[ScaredMoney614]

please check out my up incoming website and give me some criticism
now this is a really really rough draft i just want to see what people think of it so far and im trying to be original please help

lol forgot the link

here http://scaredproject.webs.com/index.htm

[Stu]

It's hosted on Webs, bad start.

The fonts are unspiring.

The background is rubbish, and looks very blurred.

Most of the links are for MySpace pages.

The other link is to a forum where the header image is bigger than the forum itself.

[ScaredMoney614]

It's hosted on Webs, bad start.

The fonts are unspiring.

The background is rubbish, and looks very blurred.

Most of the links are for MySpace pages.

The other link is to a forum where the header image is bigger than the forum itself.

Thanks for the criticism i appreciate it

i guess i got some more work to do after i get off of work